The sun is up, the tide is out... The old coastline is stunning, and empty. Scarily empty. And quiet. Why is it quiet? I know they are there, watching. Waiting.
Haha fantastic! I love how you brought us back to the seagull’s dinosaur heritage, while also building the tension to make them feel like some sort of monster. Fantastic piece
You have a way of moving on from topic to topic and I love the description of the beach around the narrator.
Can’t wait for the next part!
I loved that vignette. Man vs animals (dog - seagulls, altough both a very different).
And the way the seagulls appear and take all the space and win it over was just great. Well done!
Haha fantastic! I love how you brought us back to the seagull’s dinosaur heritage, while also building the tension to make them feel like some sort of monster. Fantastic piece
There may be a Roman reincarnation coming soon. It's an interesting piece of coastline to visit.
Ner nice. I know this feeling well. Funnily enough I'm half way through a novel which features a marauding gull called Bloodmouth.
The town down the road had ones who tried other steal beer cups from people's hands, they may be related.
this feels like a slice-of-life montage <3